For the past few weeks we have been learning how to write a report.
I found it easy to put my writing on to my slide.
I found it challenging to write my report because
I couldn't find the right questions for my Paragraphs.
Next time I need to try work harder and make it better.
Kia ora,
ReplyDeleteRivennyene
I really like how you have added so much detail to your writing.
mabey next time you could make your writing make sence.
Thankyou from Summer
Kia Ora Rivyenne,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you had a big bibliography!
When I read your post I learnt that Hiwa-i-te-rangi is the youngest star nowadays.
Maybe later you could go back and get the correct names for the stars(Just Waiti).
I love your post!
From Grace.
Kia Ora Grace,
DeleteThank you for the feedback on my blog next time i will double check the spelling on my writing.
From Rivyenne
Kia ora Rivyenne, I really liked how you put such pretty backgrounds in your report slides. Maybe next time you could add more to your stems. Over all this is great work Ka Pai To Mahi Rivyenne!
ReplyDeleteFrom the one and only Kristie-lee!
Kia Ora Kristie-lee,
DeleteThank you for your feedback Kristie next time I will try to add more on to my stems
From Rivyenne