Today in Manaiakalani we created a Digital Postcard. For my Digital Postcard I went to the mountains and it had one of the best view I have seen before in my life. I am sending this postcard to my friend Grace. I really had fun taking the photo because my friends were making me laugh. The hard thing was doing my work in time because the people around me were distracting me and I couldn't focus on my work. Next time we have Manaiakalani I am going to try focus on my work harder than getting distracted. Today we also learnt about people scamming in 2017 10 million dollars from people all over New Zealand. To that you are safe online and your not getting sacmed then you look at the top of the search bar you will either see a padlock or https.
Wednesday 28 October 2020
Monday 19 October 2020
10 Ideas Of What A Good Recount
Today in Writing me and my buddy Ngaire wrote down ten ideas of what a good recount looks like you will see down below our ten ideas of what we think are important in a recount. My learning goal for Term 4 is to get better at my editing in writing . The part in recount writing that I need to improve on for the rest of Term 4 is Using rich words in my writing. I enjoyed this learning because it wasn't that hard to do today.
1. Using Punctuation ( . , ' " )
2. Remembering your Paragraphs
3. Adjectives
4.Verbs
5.Adverbs
6.Nouns
7.Past tense
8.Rich words
9.Recent acaucations
10.Spaces between the words
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