Wednesday 10 June 2020

All about me post

We were learning about public or private. 

I found it easy to do most of my work. 

I found it hard to figure out what to right for my sentences.

Next time i will need to work harder.  


2 comments:

  1. kia ora rivyenne
    i like how you added lots of colour and a big name
    i like how you added your age but not to much info about you and you added some other things about you and you matched the topic about you.
    next time you could maybe make your photo a bit more clear so we can see it and you could also maybe make your name a bit better.

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