Wednesday 12 August 2020

The Great Awapuni Fun Run

For the past week in our writing group we have been writing a recount on our Awapuni Fun Run.

I found it easy to write my recount about the fun run because we had just done the Fun Run the day before we rote it.

I found it challenging to write my recount because i was getting distracted at some points.

Next time I will sit in a different spot so i don't get distracted by anyone near me.

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  1. Anonymous14 August 2020 at 10:40

    Hello my name is Isaac and I am your buddy class,

    I really like how you have wrote evening like how you got distracted by people next to you.
    But next time maybe put a ending to your blog maybe put, Thank you for reading feel free to leave a comment. thank you for your time hope you have a good day.

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  2. Anonymous24 September 2020 at 11:00

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  3. Anonymous24 September 2020 at 11:01

    Kia ora rivyenne,
    I really like your background you have used.
    In your story it say that you and grace were sprinting together, that reminded me when I was doing the fun run with mia. maybe next time you could add different background for each slide.
    From Ngaire.

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